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Title: Title for my new trilogy...
Post by: JRTomlin on October 18, 2019, 07:11:23 AM

How would "A Son of Scotland Trilogy" be? The first novel is 'A Noble Traitor' which will be out for Christmas. It's about one of the great heroes of the Scottish War of Independence.

Thoughts? Suggestions?

I am thinking of 'A Noble Warrior' and 'The King's Envoy' for the second and third novels but those are very much just possibiities.

Title: Re: Title for my new trilogy...
Post by: WasAnn on October 18, 2019, 08:12:35 AM

I'm not your target reader, but I like the way it resonates, for sure.

Title: Re: Title for my new trilogy...
Post by: JRTomlin on October 18, 2019, 08:32:50 AM

Thanks. Any feedback is appreciated.  :pdt

Title: Re: Title for my new trilogy...
Post by: Maggie Ann on October 18, 2019, 10:59:29 AM

Quote from: WasAnn on October 18, 2019, 08:12:35 AM

I'm not your target reader, but I like the way it resonates, for sure.

Yes, it definitely does.

Title: Re: Title for my new trilogy...
Post by: idontknowyet on October 18, 2019, 11:26:58 AM

It might be the ocd in me talking, but the third book sounds odd not starting with "A Noble" when the rest of the trilogy does.

I like it but what about without the a in the beginning just  Son of Scotland?

Title: Re: Title for my new trilogy...
Post by: JRTomlin on October 18, 2019, 01:35:05 PM

I did think that maybe it wouldn't be a good idea to set a pattern in the first two and then break it. I'll think about that. Fortunately, I have time for that decision. 

Title: Re: Title for my new trilogy...
Post by: Lorri Moulton on October 25, 2019, 08:21:25 AM

I like it!

Title: Re: Title for my new trilogy...
Post by: Virginia McClain on October 30, 2019, 05:47:58 AM

Quote from: idontknowyet on October 18, 2019, 11:26:58 AM

It might be the ocd in me talking, but the third book sounds odd not starting with "A Noble" when the rest of the trilogy does.

I like it but what about without the a in the beginning just  Son of Scotland?

I agree with this. Either all three should start differently or all the same. Two the same and one different sounds off to me.