A chess tournament itself is actionless and boring.
This is a matter of opinion:) I don't find them all that riveting myself, but some people do. I'm more interested in the people who play chess.
I read the look inside of the Morse novel and I think this is a book I would probably read, so you may be right that that's a better direction. Although this particular opening did not have much of a wow factor for me. I read the start of the first book of the series, which was similar in tone but much faster and punchier.
My idea was to try to write openings differently. To write an opening with more immediacy and more suspense than my usual attempts. Something more hip and cool. Clearly I have a lot to learn here.
I thought about Morse and Ngaio Marsh a bit and tried to work out what I might write if I wasn't trying to do something new and different. I came up with the following. I would be interested to know how it compares to my earlier attempts.
The taxi pulled up to the hotel as if blown in by the autumn wind. A litter of russet leaves curled over the hood and plastered themselves into the already overflowing gutter. Chad had accepted a lift from the airport from Blaine, a fellow competitor, and now he was regretting it. Particularly as they could both see David standing on the front steps, with his fedora pushed back and his eyes on the sky.
Blaine still spoke with a faint french accent, though he had lived in the states for decades. "I think its brave of you, to support David publicly."
Chad avoided eye contact. He always thought it was such a backhanded compliment to call someone 'brave'. It shouldn't be brave to treat people as if you liked them.
"Mind you, I wouldn't stake your reputation on his. After what he did-"
"What he did? You mean what was done to him." Chad hadn't meant to sound so angry, but somehow it was impossible to answer any other way.
His companion raised his palms.
"I think you'll find that a lot of people at this tournament lost money when they invested in chess maestro."
"An investment is always a risk."
"If David hadn't taken so many risks, we might all be a little richer, instead of poorer."
"I wouldn't know. I'm not interested in investments."
Blaine surveyed him coolly. "You probably think you'll be winning tournaments for the rest of your life." With an extra tang of bitterness, he added, "Nice to be young."
Chad looked through the windshield. David still had his face to the sun. He did, in fact, look comfortable in his own skin. He didn't look like a man who had lost half his money when his business venture failed last year. He hardly ever mentioned it.
"Can't win the game if you don't take risks," was about all David had said to him on the subject.
David had been broadly maligned as a crook. There had even been some question of removing his Grand Master status. An absurd suggestion, but rumors like that had a way of sticking around.
In an online interview, Chad had attempted to defend David's integrity. Hence this little confidential 'talk".
"Well," Chad said half-heartedly, when he saw that Blaine was waiting for him to speak. "Thanks for the heads-up."
Blaine raised a palm again, this time in dismissal. "You've got a good future ahead of you. I've been studying your moves. You've got possibilities." He put his hand on the door handle but paused once more. "Don't waste them."
Chad left the car and took a deep breath of cold air. He loved playing chess more than any thing else in life. But he wasn't sure how he felt about other chess players.
He crossed the steps and shook hands with David.
"Good to see you, brother." He looked hard into Chad's face. " Are you well?"
"I'm fine. Just recovering from a lecture from Blaine Montraine."
David grinned, showing the wrinkles around his eyes. "I feel magnanimous with the whole world on an afternoon like this, even the Blaine Montraines. I think this is going to be a good tournament. I'm feeling good about this week. You?"
"I'm feeling good."
"That's it, brother. Don't let it all get to you. Its not about the stress. Its just about the fun of the game."
A year ago, Chad had seriously considered giving up competitive chess altogether. In spite of some spectacular wins, the stress of the tournaments: the traveling, the interviews, the pressure, was eating away at his peace of mind. David had turned things around for him, always reminding him of the simple joys of the game.
A nearby knot of fellow competitors drifted in their direction. Chad was beat from traveling all day and said goodbye.
David shook his hand again and Chad turned away. But the older man placed a hand on his arm. He turned back.
"Remember, the most dangerous game your playing is the one in your head."
As Chad walked into the hotel, he couldn't help wondering what on earth David was talking about. He was always saying cryptic things like that. Chad had always chalked it up to a misguided attempt at playing philosopher. But the words would come back to him with cruel significance before the day was done. David would be found floating face down in the hotel pool, and his final game all played out.